教学辅导Units 1--2

 

Types of Writing

 Read the followings and identify them telling which is story:

Stories, notice, letter or news

1

The Banana

When Father Tomas de Berlanga set out upon his dangerous voyage to the New World, early in the 16th C, he carried with him not only his BOOKS of the Gospel, but also some roots of the rare and highly valued banana plant. With this sweet golden fruit he hoped to win the friendship, and thus to make converts, of the native Indians, he could not have guessed then that his few roots would spread through American tropical forest lands until bananas, growing wild, would be as common as the great swamp plants. And he could not have imagined that a day would come when white men would clear away thousands of acres of those forests to make room for banana plantations.

It is thought by scientists and historians that the banana first grew in southern Asia, and that through many centuries it spread to the east and west until now it is found growing in nearly all tropical regions. It does not grow on a tree, as is commonly supposed, but on a plant, perhaps the largest plant in existence without a woody stem. Only one bunch of bananas grows on each plant, but this bunch often weighs 100 pounds or more. People who like bananas probably imagine that a banana plantation would be a very delightful place in which to live; and so it is–for people who know and understand the tropical regions. But the banana planter must meet and overcome difficulties of which farmers in temperate regions have no idea. He must frequently go right into the forests and cut down trees to cover his plants. He needs a hot, himidclimate, and because diseases as well as bananas flourish in such climates, he must get rid of the insects that carry germs. He may dig irrigation ditches, build bridges and lay rail to connect his plantation with a port, so that he can ship his fruit. And then, when all is complete and his plants are growing, he must sometimes stand helplessly by while a tropical storm destroys his crop.

 

(1, Father n. 神父 2. Gospel n. 《新约》四部福音之一 3. convert n.     4. tropical a. 热带的 5.bunch n.    6.temperate a. 温和的  7.humid a. 潮湿的  8, flourish v. 迅速成长  9Irrigation ditches n. 灌溉渠  10. Rail n. 横条,扶手,横挡,铁路

 

 

2

Getting to work on time is my biggest problem. Early one morning, driving to the office, I saw a turtle in the middle of the road. I just had to rescue the creature. It took a few minutes for me to stop the car, get out, grab the turtle and move it over to the side of the road. Then I rushed on to work.

When I saw my boss at the door, I said quickly, “ it’s not my fault, Rich. There was a turtle on the road.”

Before I could go any further, he bellowed, “So what are you saying---you drove behind it?”

 

3

My friend Connie was very supportive of her husband’s campaign to be elected vice president of his union, but missed seeing him off for work the day of the election.

Since she’d be late arriving home, she left a message for him on their answering machine: “ Good luck, dear, and don’t worry. No matter how the election turns out, you’ll always  be vice president at our house.”

 

4

     a.  We were sorry to hear about your illness and hope that you recover soon. With best     wishes for a speedy recovery,

 b.  We’re sorry to hear about your grandfather. We all share your sadness. He was a wonderful man and we shall all miss him very much.

  Please call us if we can help in anyway.

 

What is your opinion?

 

Unit 2    Letters

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Letter of Introduction

D 1 Applied writing

Sample 1

 

Ping An Insurance Company of China

12 Minhua Road

Chongqing, 400013

China

June 3, 2000

 

  Mr. S. Hakka,

 Yashima Life Insurance Company,

  Yo Tsui Chome,

  Tokyo, Japan

 

  Dear Mr. Hakka,

A friend of mine, Mr. Wang Li, would very much like to meet you. He is a stu-

dent of Economics at Shancheng University, and plans to enter the insurance

  business in a few months’ time.

As you are well established in insurance, I would very appreciate it if you

could find time to see Mr. Wang, or to give him an introducetion to someone on

your staff. Thank you.

 

Yours sincerely,

Xu Jie

Xu Jie

Public Relations Department

Ping An Insurance Company of China

 

Sample 2

 

 
Dear Mr.J. White,

It gives us great pleasure to introduce Mr.Zhang Hai of Jialing group, with whom we have done business for many years. Mr. Zhang will be visiting Britain in the near future to extend their international market and we should consider it a personal favour if you would give him the benefit of your advice and experience.

Yours sincerely,

Huang Yong

Huang Yong
 

 

D 2 Summary of useful patterns

 

               To Introduce Someone to Your Friend

1.       I am just writing a few lines to introduce a very good friend of mine, Mr…

2.       A friend of mine, Mr. Wang Li, would very much like to meet you.

3.       It gives us great pleasure to introduce Mr. Zhang Hai of Jialing Group, with whom we have done business for many years.

4.       This will introduce Ms…, one of my brilliant students.

               The Reason for the Introduction

5.       He would like to make some business contacts in your area.

6.       Mr. Zhang will be visiting Britain in the near future to extend their international market.

                The Kind of Favour Asked for

7.       I would very much appreciate it if you could find time to see Mr. Wang, or to give him an introduction to someone on your staff.

8.       We should consider it a personal favour if you would give him the benefit of your advice and experience.

9.       I would be grateful if you could spare the time to see him

 

D 3 Practice

1 Give short answers to the following questions.

1)      Who is Mr. Wang Li?

2)      What is on his plan?

3)      What does Mr. Xu Jie ask Mr. Hakka to do for him?

4)      What’s the relationship between Zhang Hai and Huang Yong?

5)      Why is Zhang Hai going to Britain?

6)      How does Huang Yong ask Mr. White to help him?

2 Write a letter of introduction to a friend of yours with the following notes.

1)      Your brother in going to spend the summer vacation in London.

2)      He plans to collect some data for his graduation paper on literature.

3)      Zhou Xiao is one of the overseas students whom you know very well. Ask him to give some advice on where and how to collect the materials.

4)      Thank him in advance.

 

Letter of Congratulations:

Applied writing

Sample 1

  
Dear David,

     I have just heard that you have been appointed Regional Manager for the Middle East. Looking back on your activities so far, I know that your enthusiasm and experience are the very qualities that are needed for this position. I wish you every success in managing the affairs of the branch.

    My colleagues join me in sending you our warmest congratulations.

 

 With kindest regards,

         Yours,                           

                                         John Bonds                 

                  John Bonds                  
 

 

Sample 2


Dear Ms Hahn,

Your appointment to the Board gives me great pleasure, and I offer you my congratulations. I am delighted that your talent and hard work have been rewarded.

I had hoped that I might be able to congratulate you in person, but I am shortly going on holiday. When I return next month I will contact you and I hope we shall have the opportunity of celebrating. In the meantime, I wish you every success.

 

                                       Yours sincerely,

                                       Paul Procter        

                                       Paul Procter      
 

 

Summary of useful patterns:

D1.  Pleased with the Good News

e.g:1. I was pleased/glad/delighted/thrilled to hear that…

   2. I have just heard the splendid news…

   3. Your appointment to…gives me great pleasure

 

D2. You Deserve It

4. This is a marvelous achievement, though no more than you deserve.

5. I am very happy to see your work for…/ your abilities recognized in this way.

6. I know that your enthusiasm and experience are the very qualities that are needed for this position.

7. I am delighted that your talent and hard work have been rewarded.

 

D3  Best Wishes for the Future

8. I wish you every success.

9.All the very best for the future.

10.I rejoice in your good future.

 

 

Practice:

a.       Please answer the following questions according to the samples given above.

1.       Why dose Mr. Bonds congratulate David?

2.       According to Mr. Bonds, what qualities does David possess which make him the right person for this position?

3.       Who joins Mr. Bonds in sending their congratulations?

4.       Which of the two samples do you think sounds more formal?

5.       What qualities does Mr. Procter think make Ms. Hahn get the promotion?

b.       Write an informal letter of congratulation to a friend of yours based on the following notes.

1.       Congratulations on your friend’s appointment to the General Manger of this company.

2.       The promotion is due to his hard work.

3.       You are going to New York very soon. You promise to call him after you come back.

4.       Express your best wishes for the future.

 

The Answer:

a,  1. Because David has got an appointment as Regional Manager for the Middle East.

    2. He has both enthusiasm and experience.

    3. Mr. Bonds’ colleagues.

b.

Dear Charles,

I am very glad to hear that you have been appointed General Manager of your company. I know how hard you have worked, and you certainly deserve it. It is a great pity we can’t get together soon. I’m going to New York for two weeks but I’ll give you a ting when I get back. Meanwhile, all the very beat for the future.

 

Resume With a Cover Letter

Applied writing to B

The purpose of a resume is to get you an interview. Here are some tips on how to write a good resume: (个人简历的目的是给你争取到面试的机会。写好履历须注意以下几点:)

1.       State your objective right at the very beginning.

2.       Stress your qualifications.

3.       List your three or four jobs that represent you best.

4.       For education and experiences, always work from present to the past

5.       Don’t forget your telephone number.

6.       Don’t record references on the resume but do bring them to the interview.

Sample

NAME:               Robert Smith

ADDRESS:               423 East Street, New York, NY 10022

          TELEPHONE:               212-751-2588

. DATE OF BIRTH:               June 24, 1968

MARITAL STAUS:              Single

  

Job Objective

 Seeking a challenging position in the marking area of business which offers opportunities for growth and advancement.

 

Qualifications

Work experience in sales and marking management couple with MBA educational background.

 

Professional Experiences

1997-present          Sales Manager

JW Johnson Inc.

Deal with marking problems and advertising and

promotional matters.

1993-1997            Assistant to Sales Manager

Carlton International Inc.

Responsible for regular sales activities and training of

sales staff members.

 

Education

MBA 1990-1992       University of Texas at Austin

BS in Marking 1986-1990.   University of Washington

 

Additional Skills

French Proficiency Certificate. Extensive experience with computer networks.

References Upon Request

 

 Cover Letter(邮寄简历的附函)

 

Dear Sirs,

I’d like to be considered for the position of Marking Manager, which was advertised in The Times on May 5. please find enclosed a copy of my resume. I hope that you will schedule the time for an interview at your convenience.

 

                                         Very truly yours,

                                         Robert Smith